Author Jane Kindred recently critiqued my query and helped me fix up some things. Let me know what YOU think? All feedback is appreciated. Enjoy.
Dear
__________,
Forget Christianity. As a matter of fact, forget every religion that humans believe in. There is only one God per universe, and ours can't keep up with the ever-increasing population rate, while still attempting to manage the evil that plagues our world. He has created a system that can, or so he thought.
In 2006, an armed robbery critically injures Clayton and takes the life of his six-year-old brother, Joey. Clayton struggles to find meaning in life while dealing with the loss of his brother and absence of a father, whom he lost earlier to cancer. He is a self-proclaimed agnostic but desperately seeks closure regarding his little brother’s ill-timed death.
Meanwhile, Joey’s soul begins the intricate process of reincarnation that is well hidden from today’s society. Our God has created a multi-layered system that can automatically recycle souls, erase their previous life, and assign a new host and destination for their next life on Earth.
Clayton, only eighteen years old, succumbs to the early stages of depression. He turns to drugs and alcohol for immediate escape but constantly longs for the bond his family once had. Only after discovering signs from a hidden afterlife, he realizes the family he yearns for can be recreated with his girlfriend, Brittney.
God’s system is supposedly impeccable, but an erratic malfunction occurs in Purgatory (where the system is located). Joey’s soul is accidentally sent into the body of Clayton’s newborn son. This mistake will affect the entire world and only Clayton has the power to stop it, even if he doesn’t know it yet.
PURGATORY is a found-footage novel about two worlds secretly coexisting as one, and one brother’s determination to finally solve life’s most sought-out question – what really happens after we die? I would love to send you my Adult/Sci-Fi manuscript, PURGATORY, which is complete at 86,000 words. PURGATORY is a standalone novel with series potential (Purgatory, Inferno, and Paradise).
Sincerely,
Random Andrews
RandomCAndrews@Gmail.com
Forget Christianity. As a matter of fact, forget every religion that humans believe in. There is only one God per universe, and ours can't keep up with the ever-increasing population rate, while still attempting to manage the evil that plagues our world. He has created a system that can, or so he thought.
In 2006, an armed robbery critically injures Clayton and takes the life of his six-year-old brother, Joey. Clayton struggles to find meaning in life while dealing with the loss of his brother and absence of a father, whom he lost earlier to cancer. He is a self-proclaimed agnostic but desperately seeks closure regarding his little brother’s ill-timed death.
Meanwhile, Joey’s soul begins the intricate process of reincarnation that is well hidden from today’s society. Our God has created a multi-layered system that can automatically recycle souls, erase their previous life, and assign a new host and destination for their next life on Earth.
Clayton, only eighteen years old, succumbs to the early stages of depression. He turns to drugs and alcohol for immediate escape but constantly longs for the bond his family once had. Only after discovering signs from a hidden afterlife, he realizes the family he yearns for can be recreated with his girlfriend, Brittney.
God’s system is supposedly impeccable, but an erratic malfunction occurs in Purgatory (where the system is located). Joey’s soul is accidentally sent into the body of Clayton’s newborn son. This mistake will affect the entire world and only Clayton has the power to stop it, even if he doesn’t know it yet.
PURGATORY is a found-footage novel about two worlds secretly coexisting as one, and one brother’s determination to finally solve life’s most sought-out question – what really happens after we die? I would love to send you my Adult/Sci-Fi manuscript, PURGATORY, which is complete at 86,000 words. PURGATORY is a standalone novel with series potential (Purgatory, Inferno, and Paradise).
Sincerely,
Random Andrews
RandomCAndrews@Gmail.com
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